From 29d1f75d0b1d3034ea960d984450dc6dd3ffcf21 Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001
From: Maas Lalani <maas@lalani.dev>
Date: Fri, 22 Jul 2022 15:57:56 -0400
Subject: [PATCH] docs: shorten tag line

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 README.md | 9 +++++----
 1 file changed, 5 insertions(+), 4 deletions(-)

diff --git a/README.md b/README.md
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+++ b/README.md
@@ -9,15 +9,16 @@ Gum
     <a href="https://github.com/charmbracelet/gum/actions"><img src="https://github.com/charmbracelet/gum/workflows/build/badge.svg" alt="Build Status"></a>
 </p>
 
-Gum helps you write glamorous bash scripts by providing a collection of
-beautiful and highly configurable ready-to-use utilities.
+A tool for building beautiful shell scripts.
 
 <img src="https://stuff.charm.sh/gum/demo.gif?cache=1" width="600" alt="Shell running the ./demo.sh script" />
 
 ## Tutorial
 
-With Gum, you can build wonderful and useful bash scripts with just a few lines
-of code. Let's build a simple script to help you write [Conventional
+Gum provides beautiful and highly configurable utilities to help you write
+useful and delightful bash scripts in just a few lines of code.
+
+Let's build a simple script to help you write [Conventional
 Commits](https://www.conventionalcommits.org/en/v1.0.0/#summary) for your
 dotfiles.