From e66d9733acca4b8fd72ab263a293bbdfd3bb4ceb Mon Sep 17 00:00:00 2001 From: Julien Date: Wed, 17 Oct 2018 19:17:39 +0200 Subject: [PATCH] Minor grammatical corrections --- letter/en.md | 16 ++++++++-------- 1 file changed, 8 insertions(+), 8 deletions(-) diff --git a/letter/en.md b/letter/en.md index f8b067f..aa4b1b4 100644 --- a/letter/en.md +++ b/letter/en.md @@ -1,4 +1,4 @@ -Dear Sir/Madam: +Dear Sir or Madam: I am writing to you in your capacity as data protection officer for your company. In light of recent spam received on this email address, @@ -12,10 +12,10 @@ I proof my identity and this email address property by signing this email with my GPG key 0xefb74277ece4e222. If you require further information, please contact me at my address above. -I would like you to be aware at the outset, that I anticipate reply to my -request within one month as required under Article 12, failing which I will be -forwarding my inquiry with a letter of complaint to the CNIL (French RGPD -regulator). +I would like you to be aware at the outset, that I expect a reply to my +request within one month, as required under Article 12. Failure to comply will +leave me with no other option but to forward my inquiry with a letter of +complaint to the CNIL (French GDPR regulator). Please advise as to the following: @@ -38,7 +38,7 @@ you have or are processing. 2. Please provide me with a detailed accounting of the specific uses that you have made, are making, or will be making of my personal data. -3. Please provide a list of all third parties with whom you have (or may +3. Please provide me with a list of all third parties with whom you have (or may have) shared my personal data. a. If you cannot identify with certainty the specific third parties to @@ -114,8 +114,8 @@ advise what mitigating steps you have taken, such as iv. Any other means 8. I would like to know your information policies and standards that you -follow in relation to the safeguarding of my personal data, such as whether -you adhere to ISO27001 for information security, and more particularly, your +enforce in relation to the safeguarding of my personal data, such as whether +you comply with to ISO27001 for information security, and more particularly, your practices in relation to the following: a. Please inform me whether you have backed up my personal data to