Minor grammatical corrections

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Dear Sir/Madam:
Dear Sir or Madam:
I am writing to you in your capacity as data protection officer for your
company. In light of recent spam received on this email address,
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my GPG key 0xefb74277ece4e222.
If you require further information, please contact me at my address above.
I would like you to be aware at the outset, that I anticipate reply to my
request within one month as required under Article 12, failing which I will be
forwarding my inquiry with a letter of complaint to the CNIL (French RGPD
regulator).
I would like you to be aware at the outset, that I expect a reply to my
request within one month, as required under Article 12. Failure to comply will
leave me with no other option but to forward my inquiry with a letter of
complaint to the CNIL (French GDPR regulator).
Please advise as to the following:
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2. Please provide me with a detailed accounting of the specific uses that
you have made, are making, or will be making of my personal data.
3. Please provide a list of all third parties with whom you have (or may
3. Please provide me with a list of all third parties with whom you have (or may
have) shared my personal data.
a. If you cannot identify with certainty the specific third parties to
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iv. Any other means
8. I would like to know your information policies and standards that you
follow in relation to the safeguarding of my personal data, such as whether
you adhere to ISO27001 for information security, and more particularly, your
enforce in relation to the safeguarding of my personal data, such as whether
you comply with to ISO27001 for information security, and more particularly, your
practices in relation to the following:
a. Please inform me whether you have backed up my personal data to